Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Twenty Years of a Voice of a Writer

Sometimes you have to look backward before you can look forward. I am at a work conference this week and was worried I would not be able to post anything.  As a writer though it doesn't take much to trigger a conversation that makes you think.  In this instance, I was talking with a colleague and we got into the discussion about how a person's writing style changes.  If you look at what you wrote twenty years ago would it sound different? Would it seem different? Would you be able to see the same writer has written it?

Everyone and everything changes.  A writer grows in style and form.  A writer also experiences life.  What was experienced twenty years ago may not be the experience now.  In each moment we are naive; in the look behind at the moment we are sage.  I do think a writer changes but I think the voice of the writer stays in tact.  I think there is a voice in each of us that still shows even if our style and form has changed. 

I will let you see for yourself.  Here are two poems I wrote twenty years ago. 



Wednesday, February 18, 2015

Mistakes, Patience, and Snow

It is definitely winter outside. Everywhere it seems snow is falling. I thankfully do not live in Boston but I enjoyed having an extra snow day from work yesterday when DC got snow. It was an unexpected snow day. I know the weather guy may disagree but I always wait to see if they are accurate in their weather reports.  When it comes to weather for me "seeing is believing."  When it comes to life I tend to be a person of faith.

The snow day did another amazing thing other than give me an extra day to rest and relax at home.  It gave me the opportunity to finish Chapter Thirty. This means that I am so much closer to the end of my novel. I only have a few more chapters left.  Chapter Thirty was supposed to be done last week except there was a flaw in it that needed to be corrected.  The time at home yesterday gave me the opportunity to do just that.

I have spoken at length about the spontaneity of characters and the story line.  The original outline and thought of a story often takes on a life of its own.  It is always exciting to see how the action will unfold even to the writer.  Yet, there is still a consistency with the characters and the plot.  Unfortunately, when I was writing Chapter Thirty I realized an error in the sequence and characters. As you write each chapter you start by just writing, writing, writing.  The problem with this chapter was that it was like I was trying to fit a jigsaw piece into the wrong spot and as we all know you can not force something that does not belong to go where it shouldn't.

Each character has their own personality and motivations.  When you are beginning a novel you are developing the characters personality so that the reader can picture how they would respond to a situation. But, when you get towards the end you are focused more on the story and being led by that established personality.  We see this in life.  I have read many articles on the psychology of a person trying to break bad habits that have become a part of a personality.  When I was writing Chapter Thirty though the habits of one of the characters went too far away from their original design that the story stopped.  I could not move to the next events because something was not right.

Even when we think we have learned about ourselves and better ways to respond to negative situations we all maintain a core essence.  Characters in a book are no different.  They are real people in a writer's mind. Those real characters need a consistency of personality that flows within a story.  I have many hobbies in my life.  I love jigsaw puzzles, I love to read and to write stories and I love art and to cross-stitch.  When I work on a picture or a sewing project I follow a pattern either in my head or designed on paper.  I have worked on projects and halfway through realized I made a mistake in the design.  This is so frustrating that I put down the work until I can decompress from the error and then patiently undo much of the work that I have already done or just leave it permanently because I don't want to deal with going back over the work.

A writer can make errors resemblant to these in the story and that is exactly what I did. The problem is the task of going back and correcting them feels so big that I put the writing down for a couple of days and did not want to look at it.  Often in life we want to keep moving forward but the act of having to look back and correct is needed and takes work and we may not want to do it.  Yesterday I had unexpected quiet time and when I looked back at the chapter I realized that my mistake was not as epic as I had imagined.  I read through what I had written and easily corrected what I needed to and then ended up finishing the rest of the chapter. 

Mistakes can seem so big but being able to correct them makes one feel so accomplished.  I am ready to move forward again onto Chapter Thirty One. 

Tuesday, February 10, 2015

Endurance of Hope


My parents were a rare breed of opposites.  My mother was a plain woman while my dad usually stood out in a crowd.  My mother spoke softly and not very often while my father spoke fast and loud. She was never someone who would be noticed whereas my father seemed to soak up all the oxygen in the room with the attention he received.  She was not affectionate and did not really have any friends to speak of while he showed gentleness and kindness and loving words. Needless to say, my mother did not really make a grand impression on my life. That is not to say she was a bad mother. She was consistency but consistent does not get rewarded.  My father stood out like a giraffe in a room of kittens.  He often got accolades and rewards and people tended to do what he asked because he asked.
When I got older I rebelled against the consistency of my mother. I was loud and obnoxious. I wanted to be like my father. In truth, I was always more like him.  I often was the first to smile and laugh or tell a joke and get noticed. I was creative and imaginative. The less like my mother I became the deeper the chasm between us deepened.
This deep emotional gorge between my mother and I meant that we fought often when I was a teenager.  My dad started out trying to be the peacemaker but then he learned to just stay out of the way. The problem with fighting with my mother is that while I ranted and raved, yelled and stomped, she stood silently with her arms crossed.  She sometimes would shake her head but she almost never said anything in response to my vocal declarations of independence. I couldn’t understand it.  Would nothing make this woman feel and respond?
One morning as I was walking to school, of course in a snit as it did not help that I was never pleasant in the morning, I slammed the door to the house.  I did not say good bye to my mother or anything. Instead, I stomped down the sidewalk sullen and angry.  I wanted to play at a friend’s house after school but my mother decided I had to be home to help her with my new baby sister and the chores I failed to finish over the weekend. She informed me that if I had done my assigned tasks then I would have been able to have my play date but since I did not I had to be a responsible daughter and come home after school.  This did not go over well for me. I started out pleading and begging that I would finish my tasks that night when I returned. This of course worked to no avail.  My pleading turned to anger and with my arms crossed on my chest I stomped my way to school.  When I had gotten only a few yards away from the house my mother had come outside and was watching me. She yelled after me, “Step on a crack, break your mother’s back.” I turned my sullen face towards her, lifted my foot high with my knee up to my chest and SLAM! Down went my boot onto the crack of the sidewalk.  I proceeded to head to school with my head held high as if I had won a victory. In the distance though I could hear my mother give a small laugh at my antics which I chose to ignore thinking instead I had greatly affected her.
In my senior year of high school I was determined to make my mother notice me and acknowledge me.   One day I had the brilliant idea to yell so hard, and continue yelling, until she responded.  My plan, however, backfired on me. As I started tiring of the sound of my own voice my mother saw a break in the battle and walked away.
Watching my mother’s retreating back was like adding logs to an already burning fire.  I was about to chase after her but stopped.  I stood thinking of my mother and realized that she did that frequently. As a kid my parents did not fight often but when they did my dad was as I was.  He would yell and wave his arms around and appear like an overexcited monkey in a zoo.  She would stand perfectly still not usually responding and then when given the chance she would walk away.  She would disappear for a couple hours to return with a smile on her face and a look as if nothing untoward had ever occurred.
I don’t remember the reason behind many of the fights I would instigate but as I stood there watching my mother’s withdrawal I came to remember her leaving the room and vanishing quite regularly. This fueled my anger again and my determination. “She can’t do this to me. I am her daughter.” I followed her and chased her to her room.  When I tried the doorknob though, it was locked. I was flummoxed by that. My parents never locked their door. They usually had one of us four kids running in at any moment and gave in to the lack of privacy in our house. Privacy was sacred and unheard of while we were growing up.
After leaving home and striking it out on my own I found a peace I did not have as a child.  I excelled at college with the independence and freedom. I stood out with friends as fun and friendly and ready to party but still managed to finish my degree with high honors.  After college I continued to have minimal contact with my family.  I liked the person I had become and in the back of my head believed it would be destroyed if I was near my mother.
I got a great job in Washington, DC working in a public relations firm.  It kept me busy enough that I was able to easily give excuses for my absenteeism.  It also provided me with a personal life that I quite enjoyed. I got to attend fundraisers with the elite of the capitol. I got to dress up and be entertained by many artists and politicians and scientists.  I even met the man I would marry one day although he was not of the select group of rich and famous.  Instead he worked as a caterer at one of the events.  I had gone up to him in a panic over a shortage of hors d’oeuvres and he quietly calmed me down and then, without anyone in attendance knowing, fixed the debacle.  I was the one that asked him out as a thank you for his assistance.  On that first date I was also the one that did most of the talking.  He was quiet and steadfast.  He listened and responded when necessary but there was a gentleness and bashfulness that my own brashness responded to.  In truth, and without my being aware, our dynamic was the same as my parents.
After only a few months of dating we moved in together and then on our first anniversary we walked over to the courthouse and made our union legal.  I broke the news to my family with a phone call.  It was the first time that I thought I had heard the hurt in my mother’s voice but I dismissed it as impossible.  This woman had no way of expressing emotions so the chances of her feeling hurt were brushed out of my mind.  My parents asked if they could throw a family dinner to celebrate our nuptials but I declined citing work and a small honeymoon we were taking ourselves. 
Life became quite routine then. I guess with age comes the need to provide more order to a life. The antics and emotions of youth are often replaced with maturity and routine. My family expanded as did the definition of myself.  I was no longer a single individual I was in charge of two little ones who depended on me for existence.  We visited the family on the holidays and got the obligatory calls on the birthdays but it was like living in a world where there was us and then there was them.  We were two countries where you were allowed to visit but you could not stay.
After having my kids I thought more of my mother and our differences.  I realized I was no longer angry with her but there was still a veil of incomprehension between us. We kept our distance and maintained civility but as I watched my kids grow I couldn’t help but wonder if I could ever know my mother, if I could ever relate to her or learn from her.  I watched my friends and their families and did long for a relationship with her where I could get advice when I needed on raising my kids or handling fights with my spouse or even to vent about my career.  I tried not to think this way too often because I accepted for fact this was not our relationship. 
Life is about change though.  Change often happens in ways that feels like you are being ripped apart in order to be put back together again.  I will never forget the time.  I had just looked at the clock when the phone rang.  I was about to head out to pick up the kids from their respective play dates and was about to let it go to voicemail but seeing that I had five minutes I decided to answer it.  It was probably a salesperson anyway.
5:06.  That was the time.  Those numbers flash in my head now with neon lights like an alarm clock in a dark room.  I ran over to the phone and picked it up off the cradle.  “Hello.” I said in my best rushed voice so that the person on the other end would know not to talk too long with their sales pitch.
“Sweetheart?”
“Dad!  Hi." I said surprised.  "You don’t usually call me.  Mom usually calls.  How are you?”
“I need to tell you something.”
“Okay Dad.  Shoot.”  I said lost in my own world still that I failed to notice the heaviness to his voice .  I remember running through the list of items I still had to do for the day.  “Pick up the kids, go to the grocery store, make an appointment for the dog to get his fur trimmed, pick up Bobby’s nasal prescription…”
I realized that Dad had been talking and I wasn’t paying attention.  “Sorry Dad I didn’t hear you.  I am a little rushed right now and can’t focus.  Maybe I can call you tonight?”
“It is your mother.  She has cancer.”
Cancer.
That one word stopped the clocks.  It made my skin turn cold and my heart stop beating. I felt as if the Earth came to a grinding stop.  I couldn’t get air into my lungs. Everything came to a halt.  I could faintly make out my father continuing to talk but it was like his words we being echoed into a cave.
“She didn’t want me to tell you and worry you but I think you should come visit honey.  Do this one thing for me at least.  Try to make peace with your mother.”
Later that evening my husband and I worked out the schedules so that I could fly out to visit them. I felt like a robot going through the motions.  I did not want to stop and evaluate how I felt but I realized that I was angry with my mother all over again. Once more she is leaving with no explanation and this time with no hope of resolution.  I felt like a little kid again trying to get her attention.
I flew home the next day.  After we landed I sat in the bar of the airport for hours.  I couldn’t bring myself to get into the rental car I had reserved and drive to their house. I wanted to go in and scream at her and get her to pay attention again and this time she would answer me.  I finally gave in to the inevitable and headed to my familial home.

As I pulled up I looked at it, I felt like I was returning to a dream that you hadn't had in years, familiar with the scene but the view was cloudy and not quite as you recalled.  Over the past few years the house had been falling under a bit of disrepair.  The paint was starting to peel and one of the rain gutters looked like it was holding on for dear life but about to let go.  I shook my head realizing that my Dad couldn’t keep up with the house anymore either. What kind of scene was I about to walk into?  Both parents frail and beyond repair much like the house?
It was still early evening but the sun was beginning to set.  I forgot how cool the weather got in the evenings here in the autumn and started to give a little shiver.  I walked over to the door and stood there.  I did not feel like I could just walk in anymore.  This was not my home and these people were almost strangers to me rather than parents.  I lifted the knocker and rapped quickly taking in a breath and wanting the initial welcomes over with.
The door opened and there stood my father.  He had shrunk a few inches since the last time I saw him.  His usually neat hair seemed unkempt and stood up in places.  He had one shirt corner untucked and thick wool socks on his feet, that did not match.  Without even a hello he pulled me into a hug and I finally felt a sense of familiarity.  My dad still smelled the same and his warm bear-like hugs still gave me comfort. 
After we parted he took my hand and led me down the hallway, shuffling as he walked.  As a kid we all used to have to run to keep up with this big, bear of a man but now I had to slow down so that he didn’t get too winded.  My heart gave a pang of sadness over the passage of time that no one can fight.  He led me to my old bedroom which seemed oddly similar and preserved.  “Thanks Dad.  I am going to rest a bit before talking to Mom.  Where is she?”
“We had to convert the downstairs den into a bedroom for her. She couldn’t take the stairs anymore.  Don’t rest too long.  We would love to have a big family dinner one more time.  All your brothers and sisters are coming and their kids and spouses.  It will be fun.”  As he said this last part he gave a grunt.  He was trying to lift the suitcase onto the top of the small nightstand and could not seem to lift it high enough.
“Dad give me that.  I don’t need to really unpack anyway. I am not staying long.  Just a couple days at the most.  I have to get back.”
The obvious disappointment in his eyes made my heart ache.  He did not say anything but nodded his head and shuffled out of the room saying, “Dinner with everyone is at seven.  It will be in the den of course.”  He softly closed the door shut behind him and I stood in the middle of this small room that once felt bigger in this strange house that once was home.  I was at a loss.  I felt like Dorothy only I was really from Oz and I was instead put into Kansas.  I needed to get back to the Technicolor and out of the black and white world of my past.
I tried to lie down and close my eyes but could not get comfortable.  I finally got up and walked over to the bookcase and was pulling down old favorites and smiling.  I was still restless though and we still had an hour before dinner.  I was not ready to see anyone but I couldn’t stay in this small room either.  I started to feel claustrophobic and had to get out and walk. I opened the door gingerly and peeked to make sure no one was coming.  I still was not ready for any interaction with family.  Not seeing anyone I started to tip toe down the hallway.
When I got to the edge of the stairs I remembered and looking down gave a smile.  I could still recollect each spot on the stairs that would creak.  I tested myself again now and made it down the stairs without a sound.  Without thinking about where I was heading I turned right down a little hallway and opened the door at the end.  This was always the favorite room for everyone and yet here I was now standing and facing the sight of my mother.  “Oh sorry.  I will come back.”  I said seeing her awake and propped up on pillows a shell of her former self.
It was astonishing how fragile she seemed.  Her eyes looked too big in her thin, hollowed face.  I was thrown back at the sight of my mother.  This was not the cold, plain, distant woman of my past.  This frail woman with the soft, glowing eyes that still held a shine and sharpness to them could not be her.  I wanted to run as fast as I could out of this room and back to my own home and started to back away.
I saw a thin arm raise up and her hand motion me to come over to her.  I stopped backing out but did not want to get any closer.  She finally said, “It is okay.  Come sit here.  I want to give you something.  I have wanted to give it to you for a very long time.”
My curiosity got the better of me and I walked over. As I sat down I felt my mother’s hand on my own and again I gave a shiver.  The feel of her bones and the coldness of her skin were not right.  I wanted to snatch my hand back but resisted the temptation.  “Can you go and get this jar on the shelf?”
I looked over to where she was pointing but did not see anything.  “What jar?”
“It is pushed toward the back.  Bring it to me.”  With each sentence she would have to take a rasping breath.
I walked over and moving some books to the side finally saw a small glass jar.  It was decorated with a ribbon around the edge of the lid and a bit of flowery fabric which encircled the jar itself hiding its contents.  I brought the jar over to her and sat back down.  “Open it.”  She whispered.
I turned the lid and removed it peering inside only to find that it was empty.  I turned it over as if to empty the contents and said, “there is nothing in it.”
Mother gave a small, weak smile and said, “Of course it is.  When you were a teenager I think I filled it everyday but now days I only have to fill it rarely.”  She tried to chuckle but it came out as a gurgle and then she started coughing hard. I held onto her thin frame and rubbed her back as she coughed like she used to do when we were little.
Once she was able to catch her breath again I laid her back down. “I don’t understand.  What was it filled with when I was a teenager?”
“This is my hope jar.”
“Your hope jar?  Is that like a hope chest only with fewer expectations?” I asked trying to make a joke but my laughter fell flat on my ears as I looked at the face of my mother.  She smiled at me though and I could see a twinkle of enjoyment which surprised me.  This woman never seemed to respond to me with emotion or enjoyment.  I was taken aback.
“My mother gave me this hope jar.  Now I share it with you.”
“So I just pray and act like it holds my hopes.  That is a bit too esoteric even for me mom.”
She again gave a small smile. She put her fingers in my own and in a voice that seemed to have gathered a bit of strength told me her secret.
“I was an awful kid growing up.  I tormented your aunts and uncles.  I was always in trouble.  I was anxious and couldn’t sit still.  I got into fights or cried a lot.”  She stopped when she saw my incredulous expression.  She just nodded her head.  “It is true.  One day in particular I was on a tear.  I did not stop and managed to break my mother’s favorite vase, yell at my brother and sadly hide all my sister’s dolls from her.”
I started to laugh at the thought of my docile mother doing any of what she was saying.  She continued on with her tale, “My mother took me out to the shed.  I was petrified.  I believed that she was going to whip me with father’s belt or something.  I imagined the worst.  When we got to the shed I saw that she had set up a tea table.  She asked me to sit down and have tea with her. I was so surprised I think that I did it without thinking.  She poured the tea like a grand lady.  My mother always held herself so straight and aristocratic and…well stiff.  You have accused me of such which makes me laugh because I am like my mother it seems.”
Mom sat in silence for a few moments and I could tell she was replaying some bygone memories in her head.  I waited patiently now, curious as to how this story was going to play out.  After a brief spell she continued on, “Where was I? Oh yeah, tea. Well, I started to squirm in my seat of course.  I never could sit still long around my mother.  She was always so stiff and quiet and it made me nervous.  She put her hand on mine trying to soothe me but it didn’t and I started whining that I wanted to go and play.  She finally reached over and pulled this glass jar into her lap.”
“I looked at it and dismissed it instantly.  I was much less curious than she I believe had hoped.  But, she placed it in my hand and told me that this was my Hope Jar. Well, I heard that and handed it back saying no thank you.  I figured it was just one of her tricks to get me to behave.  She of course hands it back to me and firmly holds it to my hand.  She stared me right in the face so intensely I was too scared to backtalk her.  She told me that this is where I write down my hopes, or my fears and I put them in the jar.  Then I close the lid and leave them there.  I am not allowed to think of them again. After a month I can open the jar, read them out loud to myself and then bury the fears and hold onto the hopes.”
I stared at my mother thinking that she was rambling and confused.  This story sounded a bit childish and not like her at all.  I looked at her skeptically.  “Do you know what I did with that jar that my mother held to my hand?”
I shook my head saying, “Noooo.”  Drawing out the word.
“I threw it.”  At that she laughed out loud which produced another fit of coughing and gasping for air worse than before.  I was about to jump up and get Dad when she shook her head and seemed to finally regain some of her composure.
I let her lie quietly for a while as she breathed, putting the oxygen mask to her face, taking big gulping breaths of air.  After what seemed like ten minutes but was probably only about three she pulled the mask down and gave me a wink, which again made me stare at my mother like she had just grown two heads.  My mother didn’t wink, whistle or spit we use to say.  “Can you believe I threw that jar?”
I patted her hand and shook my head no.  “My mother was surprised also.  I put a crack down one side of it but I didn’t break it.  See.  You can still see the crack.”  She remarked as she pointed it out.
I just again nodded without saying a word and let her continue.  “I thought like you probably do right now and probably how you have most your life.  I thought my mother was nuts.  I wasn’t some little five year old anymore that believed in Santa and the Easter Bunny.  So, believing in a hope jar was too far-fetched for my teenage brain and I was not shy about telling her so either.  She picked up that jar and I could see how sad she was.  She just told me though that she would hold on to it until I was ready.  I laughed and probably gave her a smart remark like I don’t need no kid jar for my hopes and fears.  I was about to run off too but something she said has always stayed with me.”  The mother paused.
I was again engrossed in the story and as I waited for the mother to continue I got impatient and said, “So, what did she say?”
“She said that sometimes we mix our fears in with our hopes and that is ok.  We need to learn to bury our fears and let hope endure.  We need to always have an endurance of hope.”
I gave a snort and the mother nodded.  “I know I felt the same.  Do you know what happened though?”
“What?” I asked a bit sarcastically.
“Life. I lost your Uncle to the Vietnam War.  I grew up and had a family and kids and had to put my own dreams on hold.  My daughter always looked at me with anger and pity and I knew she did not respect me.  Life happened.  After I lost my brother I remembered that jar and I pulled it out.  I needed something that brought comfort where I could divide out my hopes and my fears.”
She put up her hand seeing that I was about to argue with her. “I know what you want to say.  When you were little I used the jar so that I wouldn't respond to your anger and say something I regretted.  Oh the times I wanted to yell back.  Instead I would wait until I could break away and then go and sit in my bedroom and write down all my fears for you.  Then I would take and close them in the jar.  There were times I had to empty that jar once a week versus once a month and it held more fears than hopes.  It always made me feel better though.”
“That is where you used to go and what you used to do?” I asked in amazement. “I thought you just couldn't stand talking to me.”
“No, no, no.” She shook her head.  “You were a lot like me.”  At that pronouncement I laughed.  “You are impatient and emotional like me.  You may be outgoing and loud like your father but you are like me also.”
She opened my hand and laid the jar in it.  “Take this to at least have something of your mom’s. One day you may want to fill it.”
I could see that she was getting very tired and also that family was starting to arrive.  I could hear my loud brother and his loud laugh in the living room.  I was uncomfortable with the woman in front of me.  It was like listening and looking at a stranger.  There was a familiarity and closeness she was showing now and I had a sudden urge to flee.  Using an excuse, I said, “I am going to let you get some rest and go greet the rest of the family.”  She just patted my hand and then closed her eyes.  As I head out the door and, without thinking, I set the jar back on the bookcase.
True to my word, I stayed only two days visiting with family before I made my escape.  As I flew home I sat and thought of the story mother told me dismissing it finally as something told by a dying woman who was making a last stand.  As we touched down on the tarmac I felt myself relax. I was going to push aside all I felt and heard. It does not touch my life now.
I retrieved my bags and went to go find my family who were waiting for me. As I spotted them in the distance I saw my husband’s face. It held fear and grief and like a knife to my heart I knew. I slowed my steps trying to prolong the inevitable announcement. When I reached him he just took my hand and gave me the news.  My mother had passed away in her sleep after I left that morning. 
The next week was a blur of telephone calls and flying back home again and moving among crowds of family and friends receiving words that had no meaning but were meant to console.  As the oldest I was looked on to take the lead. I put myself into this task with the same determination I had with everything. I told myself over and over that I would grieve after the funeral.  I would feel what I should when it was quiet again.
Yet, weeks passed and this dark feeling of numbness never left me. I walked around with it like it was a burden on my back. I went through my days on automatic pilot. My husband tried to talk to me about mother and my kids tried to offer sweet childish words of comfort but nothing broke through the walls around my heart. I smiled when needed and nodded when even a smile couldn’t be coaxed.  At the end of each day I lie in bed unable to sleep steering clear from thoughts of mother and how little got resolved between us. I wondered if my kids would feel the same way about me.
I will always remember. It was a Saturday.  Both kids were taken to sports practices by my husband who wanted me to take the day off and relax. All I did was sit in front of the television though numbing my thoughts from thinking and feeling.  The doorbell echoed loudly throughout the house interrupting my cloud of self-pity and I managed to get up and shuffle my tired body to it.
I opened the door and looked out.  I was surprised to see that no one was standing there and was about to turn around and go back to my world of despondency when I glanced down quickly seeing a small brown package sitting on the welcome mat.  Picking it up I noticed my father’s handwriting on the address label.  I carried it inside and set it on the table placing the package in front of me.
I was afraid to open it and see what was inside. I did not want anything that could be a reminder to the grief I carried around with me like a badge of honor.  I stared at the package for twenty minutes.  Finally, I braced myself.  I pulled the package closer and ran my fingers along the edges loosening the tape.  After removing the paper I slid open the lid of the box and peered inside seeing mounds of tissue paper hiding the contents within. I gently pushed back the crinkly white paper and stuck my hand inside.  I felt something cool and hard and pulled it out of the box.
There sitting on the tabletop now was the Hope Jar.  The jar that mother used to put her fears and her hopes and then divide them out, burying the fears and holding onto the hopes.  I was not ready to hold onto this memento she had so desperately tried to give me before she died.  I went to return it to the box when I saw that under the tissue paper were hundreds of folded scrap sheets of paper.  I pulled one out and read it. “I hope that one day my daughter will see how much I love her.”  I gasped and threw it down pulling out another one.  “I hope one day I will be a famous writer.”
I couldn’t believe what I was reading.  She had kept each and every one of her hopes and now they sat here in a box in front of me.  I sat for hours unfolding each sheet of paper and reading each item written on it.  “I hope I will find a husband that loves me forever.” “I hope that my kids grow up to be happy adults.” Even the very personal ones, “I hope that my husband is not having an affair with the new blond secretary in his office.” “I hope I have enough strength to not yell back at my daughter in anger.” “I hope that my daughter will love me again one day.”
When I was done the table was covered in hundreds of small sheets of paper.  I felt something inside of me give like a dam being released and I started to cry.  I cried with complete abandon for everything. I realized that those sheets of paper gave me what I was seeking.  Here was a story and an insight about my mother that I never was able to get in life and I cried for her and for us. After the long cry I felt myself settle down again only without the numbness and desperation. I started feeling a bit of my own will return.  I got up and found a scrap piece of paper beside the telephone we used to take messages and I sat back down.  I wrote my own hope onto the sheet of paper and folded it up.
I reached over and pulled the Hope Jar closer to me and unscrewed the lid.  I went to drop the note inside the jar but noticed a sheet of folded paper blocked everything.  I pulled it out and was again surprised at the gift my mother had truly left me.  She wrote a note on the top which was difficult to read.  She had grown so frail and her hands shook but she managed to get the note written to her by her own pen.
“My Daughter.  The Hope Jar is more than childish wishes. It is more than complaints and requests.  This jar reminds us that hope endures beyond our fears.  We must let go of the fears and hold onto the hopes. One day you will see this. Your loving mother to the end.”
I laid the paper in front of me and read the words my mother had written so many years ago:
Hope doesn’t come in a bottle
It won’t visit you in your sleep

Hope won’t grow in a fallow field
Or thrive in an empty heart
Hope doesn’t come gift wrapped with a pretty bow
It won’t sneak up behind you and scream surprise
Hope does not smile and crack wise
Or ridicule with words that cut like a knife
Hope is not an orator or the audience
It doesn’t drive away with a strong wind
Hope is not a passenger
Nor the driver
Hope is not our enemies
It is not our fair weather friends
Hope doesn’t sit take a nap under a tree

Or lie in our stares
Hope has no meaning
Among the anger and fear
Hope is not at the end of a gun
Killing the souls that lie within

Hope is not in the mirror
Of the wasted and lost
Hope is not hungry or thirsty
It doesn’t want or ask


Hope is not left useless
On a weekend away
Hope is not a sign
That says detour ahead
Hope is not rich nor poor
It doesn’t discriminate against our need
Hope does not want
Or give to the futile
Hope is not lust
Or wanton desire
Hope is not hate or anger
It is not inside your fist

Hope is not a title
Nor is it the word
Hope is a story
We breathe into our memory

Hope lies in our prayers
It sits and listens at our feet
Hope waits in a quiet room
Until its name is called
Hope blows in the breeze
Like a boomerang that always returns
Hope is a song
Sung with tears
Hope is a book and a picture
Hope is a teacher
Hope is a confidant and friend
Hope does not sit on a shelf
Bottled and forgotten
Hope runs through the veins
Hope beats with the heart
Hope knows our dreams
From within
It does not leave a calling card
It has not moved to the next town
There is no obituary
Or funeral procession
Hope stands tall
Hope stand firm
Against the enemy of self-doubt
Against the malice of indifference
Hope is pure
Hope is love and

Hope endures…

After finishing those words I sat back in my chair. Gone was the grief and self-pity.  Gone was the anger and doubt. I got the answers I wanted and much more. I looked at my scrap piece of paper that I wrote my own hope on. Finally, I closed my eyes and smiled. I folded the paper and slid it into the jar and whispered, “Because hope endures."

Tuesday, February 3, 2015

Donuts, Football and the Big Thirty


“Begin at the beginning and go on till you come to the end: then stop.” Lewis Carroll

This past weekend was Super Bowl weekend.  Fans or just fair weather revelers all over were glued to their TVs watching two teams compete for the big win.  I, of course, was glued to my TV watching something else and getting much more writing done.  In fact I am almost completed with Chapter Twenty Nine.

Whenever I was asked the question how long would my novel be I would say thirty chapters because in reality you do not know.  Writing a novel is a lot like life.  We can not always predict what will happen in the future but we try to plan it out the best that we can to protect ourselves.  I did not know that in Chapter Twenty Nine a character I had not expected would come and assist one of our leading ladies.  I did not know that in order for this story to finally come to an end I would need three or four more chapters more than I had planned.  In reality, I did not know it would take me this long to finish my first novel. Although I am the writer it is as if the story unfolding before me is a surprise to me as well.   

While I have felt the enormity of the task in the past, and I have felt brief moments of wanting to give up, I am also a stubborn individual who derives great pleasure from writing.  All the work and the creativity have also gotten me through many rough times in my life.  So as Lewis Carroll advised I started at the beginning and I went on and I am rewarded because I am almost to the end.  I have a vision of how the ending of the story will unfold but I am still excited to see the end result and if it will happen as I planned. 

I do know that I also noticed while I was editing a recently finished chapter that when I freestyle write I tend to use some favorite words for emphasis.  Those same words often end up perishing under the red pen of my editing. It starts out innocently enough with a “though” or and “and” thrown in, maybe even a “yet” or “still”.  This is pretty innocuous overall.  It does not stay that way.  Just because you know a big, beautiful, SAT-worthy word does not mean it should be thrown in for emphasis.

More often than not this sin of the wordy is not done consciously. When I noticed how much I was removing I thought to how we converse. If we want to emphasize or get a particular point across we tend to add in those filler words. If we are overly emotional or excitable this can happen to stress an important idea. I started noticing the habits of others in conversation.  Now, it would seem that if we talk this way we should write this way.  Well the answer to that would be “no.”

Think back to the donut and, in particular, the jelly or cream filled donut.  Those donuts are very popular.  I will admit I am not a fan of donuts but it is always fun watching people eat those in particular.  If there is too much cream or jelly inside it shoots out and then the scene is chaos filled with sugar.  It is a mess.  When you go to take the next bite you proceed with caution.  You do not have that uninhibited delight you had when you were about to take the first bite.  It is the same for the reader. When we are reading we are already thinking about what is being written, understanding it and imaging the scene.  When we add in too many filler words it often comes across as the cream inside the donut.  Makes the story seem sweet but it will end up a mess. The story feels bogged down in too much detail.  The reader feels covered in words that are unnecessary so it is taking longer to imagine the scene and enjoy the story.

Filler words are still necessary in many cases but there should be a “Proceed with Caution” sign as you are editing the document.  Does that word truly enhance the story or are we filling it with too much sugar?  As I finish Chapter Twenty Nine and head over to the BIG THIRTY I am a bit more cautious.  These scenes are full of emotion and intensity and the filler words were creeping into the story. We are all a little wiser at thirty than we were at twenty and even my novel shows this maturity. Welcome to the Big Thirty!